Comments on: Haiku - Water or Life? - plus one more

By: Marcia (MeeAugraphie)

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) — Thu, 26 Jul 2007 15:11:00 +0000

Rose Dewey Knickers - Yes, they do rage or trickle from me, too -- the first haiku is so relaxing to me, I want to find a pool or beach and just float.

Spacedlaw - Thank you, that was inspired by photos of Snoqualmie Falls, an almost local waterfall.

Tumblewords - I love that something as life giving as water does have so many possible interpretations, glad you liked some of mine.

Daisy - I am glad you found the images so vivid, thank you, it may be because, unfortunately, I had just watched news videos of just that.

Blondie - Thank you for seeing the last water haiku as thought provoking, it is wonderful to inspire thought in another person.

The Heartful Blogger - raging water flies is a phrase I am rather happy with, thank you for telling me you found it vivid.

Plain foolish - I love to just rest in the waves, too, but I get so relaxed I fear falling asleep and floating face first. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

Patois - water is so deceptive in its power, I am glad I was able to convey it a bit. Thank you for telling me.

Thank y'all for commenting, I know it takes away from reading more. . .

By: Patois

Patois — Fri, 20 Jul 2007 03:22:00 +0000

I love your “raging water” one. I feel that power of the water.

By: Plain Foolish

Plain Foolish — Wed, 18 Jul 2007 13:55:00 +0000

I like the feeling of the salt water holding you. Reminds me of just resting in the waves.

By: the heartful blogger

the heartful blogger — Wed, 18 Jul 2007 13:15:00 +0000

The third one is my favourite, especially “raging water flies”, so vivid.

By: blondie

blondie — Wed, 18 Jul 2007 07:36:00 +0000

Oh, love the last water haiku - very thought-provoking and the imagery is just perfect.

By: Daisy

Daisy — Tue, 17 Jul 2007 18:10:00 +0000

I like the third one. It’s so true and the images are so vivid.

By: tumblewords

tumblewords — Tue, 17 Jul 2007 14:51:00 +0000

Nice, very nice! Water has so many interpretations…liked these.

By: spacedlaw

spacedlaw — Tue, 17 Jul 2007 11:12:00 +0000

I love that last one about the lions.

By: Rose Dewy Knickers

Rose Dewy Knickers — Tue, 17 Jul 2007 10:09:00 +0000

Morning Marcia,

Sometimes the poems rage sometimes they trickle.

I really like the first one. Reminds me of a spa.

Rose

xo

By: Marcia (MeeAugraphie)

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) — Tue, 17 Jul 2007 08:45:00 +0000

Crafty Green Poet - The floods were the inspiration for the last one. Thank you for commenting.

I should note, that when this comment was written, the macho lion was not posted, so the last one she is referring to is the last of the three under one title.