MeeAugraphie

9 Comments

1. greggo
   Posted August 28, 2007 at 5:01 pm | Permalink

   i love the short depth of field in your photo, and the high contrast between red and green, which your haiku highlights very well.

   Thank you, Greggo!

2. Tumblewords
   Posted August 28, 2007 at 7:26 pm | Permalink

   Spectacular photo and haiku. I particularly like the phrase ‘digestion’s palate’. I see the color. Nice!

   Thanks, Susan, I wasn’t sure how others would take that phrase.

3. Clare
   Posted August 29, 2007 at 12:06 am | Permalink

   Gorgeous! The red and green really pop — and your haiku is really nice!! I love the feeling of transition in this from eye to palate.

   Clare, I was so involved in taking the photos, I never thought to try one. Thank you, the colors in the photo drew me more than the objects, actually.

4. Crafty Green Poet
   Posted August 29, 2007 at 12:48 am | Permalink

   You make me want to go gather berries!

   Juliet, we missed the farmers markets this weekend, I was hoping they would have a few berries left…. I haven’t yet learned what I can eat on our natural hill, I forgot to ask the previous owners.

5. getzen
   Posted August 29, 2007 at 10:46 am | Permalink

   Darling haiku and photo! I want to reach out and taste it

   And I wanted to romp in the field of wild flowers you posted. Thank you, Getzen.

6. spacedlaw
   Posted August 30, 2007 at 11:27 pm | Permalink

   Berries are perfect tiny treasures indeed, easily swallowed, by us or birds.

   Perfect tiny treasures, I like that description, spacedlaw.

7. jem
   Posted August 31, 2007 at 7:17 am | Permalink

   Great reference to the way the colour only last in its current form. And ‘Berry bright red for the eye’ is such a pleasing phrase - I’m singing it to myself!

   Jem, I’m so glad you were singing it. Made my day.

8. MeeAugraphie
   Posted August 31, 2007 at 8:46 am | Permalink

   Note: Patricia/Roswila tried to add this comment, but I had so cleverly had this box and the font both in white for a few hours that day…. grin:

   I love the contrast in both the photo and the haiku. I also enjoyed the implied comparison between visual hunger and physical.

   Patricia (a/k/a Roswila)

   
   Patricia - thank you for going through all that to comment!

9. plain foolish
   Posted August 31, 2007 at 8:57 am | Permalink

   Oh, I really like the photo and the way the berry feeds both the eye and the mouth. So nice.

   Thank you, Plain Foolish.