Comments on: Haiku - Simplicity of Toddlers http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/ All about me, my words, that is! Tue, 06 Jan 2009 23:25:51 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: Megan http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/comment-page-1/#comment-903 Megan Fri, 14 Sep 2007 16:08:57 +0000 http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/#comment-903 <p>toddler repeats feat...great word play...but each of these is a little capsule of a moment. great fun to read these.</p> <em> Megan, thank you, glad they were fun to read.</em> toddler repeats feat…great word play…but each of these is a little capsule of a moment. great fun to read these.


Megan, thank you, glad they were fun to read.

]]> By: patois http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/comment-page-1/#comment-886 patois Fri, 14 Sep 2007 02:36:28 +0000 http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/#comment-886 <p>Funny the inspiration. The "pretty tiny" one I did was on the lovely wish faeries created by those dandelion seeds. The first time they accomplish it, bliss. Lovely ku. Love how you have brought him to life by how he whispers your name.</p> <em>Patois, thanks, wish faeries, I have to check that out... That name haiku, I felt and relived the moment as I wrote it... it really felt special, he is a wonderful child. Thank you. </em> Funny the inspiration. The “pretty tiny” one I did was on the lovely wish faeries created by those dandelion seeds. The first time they accomplish it, bliss. Lovely ku. Love how you have brought him to life by how he whispers your name.

Patois, thanks, wish faeries, I have to check that out… That name haiku, I felt and relived the moment as I wrote it… it really felt special, he is a wonderful child. Thank you.

]]> By: spacedlaw http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/comment-page-1/#comment-870 spacedlaw Thu, 13 Sep 2007 07:28:01 +0000 http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/#comment-870 <p>These made me smile...<br /> Such simple things and a real achievement and treat for the toddler.</p> <em>I'm glad you smiled, Spacedlaw. Toddlers are so full of wonder and achievement.</em> These made me smile…
Such simple things and a real achievement and treat for the toddler.

I’m glad you smiled, Spacedlaw. Toddlers are so full of wonder and achievement.

]]> By: greggo http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/comment-page-1/#comment-845 greggo Wed, 12 Sep 2007 01:41:48 +0000 http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/#comment-845 <p>gorgeous imagery - i can almost picture his face looking up at you. :-)</p> <em>Greggo, I'm glad the imagery came through, they were based on the weekend. Thank you.</em> gorgeous imagery - i can almost picture his face looking up at you. :-)

Greggo, I’m glad the imagery came through, they were based on the weekend. Thank you.

]]> By: Tumblewords http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/comment-page-1/#comment-840 Tumblewords Tue, 11 Sep 2007 20:05:24 +0000 http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/#comment-840 <p>Ah! The sweetness, the simplicity. Lovely. Aren't little ones such a treat?</p> <em> Susan, thank you. They are a treat, he was especially.</em> Ah! The sweetness, the simplicity. Lovely. Aren’t little ones such a treat?


Susan, thank you. They are a treat, he was especially.

]]> By: jo http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/comment-page-1/#comment-833 jo Tue, 11 Sep 2007 09:05:34 +0000 http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/#comment-833 <p>Absolutely love all three, though as a mother the first is my favourite (and well done on the 17).</p> <em>Jo, thank you. I think his mother would agree with you on the first, she handed him the first Dandelion in seed.</em> Absolutely love all three, though as a mother the first is my favourite (and well done on the 17).

Jo, thank you. I think his mother would agree with you on the first, she handed him the first Dandelion in seed.

]]> By: AnnieElf http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/comment-page-1/#comment-830 AnnieElf Tue, 11 Sep 2007 06:14:11 +0000 http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/#comment-830 <p>They are all filled with tenderness but it is the first one and the final line especially, the deeply moves me.</p> <em>AnnieElf - It feels good that you were moved by my haiku. Thank you.</em> They are all filled with tenderness but it is the first one and the final line especially, the deeply moves me.

AnnieElf - It feels good that you were moved by my haiku. Thank you.

]]> By: Rae Trigg http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/comment-page-1/#comment-827 Rae Trigg Tue, 11 Sep 2007 03:34:37 +0000 http://meeaugraphie.com/2007/09/10/haiku-simplicity-of-toddlers/#comment-827 <p>Lovely haiku, each a wonderful picture of a young child. I especially like the second one.</p> <em>Rae - Thank you. That second one was exactly what I thought for the first day, the second day he found out I could lift him.</em> Lovely haiku, each a wonderful picture of a young child. I especially like the second one.

Rae - Thank you. That second one was exactly what I thought for the first day, the second day he found out I could lift him.

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