Comments on: Haiku - Juicy

By: Quietpaths

Quietpaths — Fri, 28 Sep 2007 19:46:02 +0000

Really great and all three so different!

patois — Fri, 28 Sep 2007 13:11:14 +0000

All three are delightful. I love how you took the prompt in three distinct directions but all tied together. Darling, the last two in particular.

spacedlaw — Thu, 27 Sep 2007 06:19:07 +0000

That last one is extremely graphic. I can hear the giggles.

jo — Tue, 25 Sep 2007 18:07:40 +0000

Loving one and three! Well done.

greggo — Tue, 25 Sep 2007 13:18:23 +0000

these are great. the last two especially brought a smile to my face!

Nancy — Tue, 25 Sep 2007 13:16:34 +0000

These are all great. I like the first one. Our society is SO gossip orientated.

Crafty Green Poet — Tue, 25 Sep 2007 07:47:09 +0000

Nice variety of juiciness there!

Tumblewords — Tue, 25 Sep 2007 05:31:10 +0000

Ah, it’s about juicy gossip and kissing dogs and… wonderful, fun, warm and clever!

Rae Trigg — Tue, 25 Sep 2007 03:42:08 +0000

I like your haiku about gossip, especially the image of the foot standing ready.

Patricia/Roswila — Tue, 25 Sep 2007 02:53:18 +0000

A puppy’s kiss, yes, a wonderful juicy moment.