Haiku - Juicy

September 24, 2007 | Filed Under Haiku, Linked, Poetry 

Haiku - One Deep Breath gave an interesting prompt this week: juicy. I bet the photos the others post will be great… You will have to imagine the photos that would go with these, but I am quite sure you can. Check out everyone’s interpretation of juicy.

Juice in motion

Juicy gossip runs
rampant mouth to open ear
foot stands in ready

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Juice and pulp run orange
on white graced with angel wings
Dad clicks camera

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Juicy puppy kiss
runs cleft chin to eyebrow’s arch
squeals of joy follow

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MeeAugraphie
09/24/07

Enjoy your day, I bet you wrote your own, you certainly could you know.

Comments

12 Responses to “Haiku - Juicy”

  1. paisley on September 24th, 2007 18:57

    you and i shared a penchant for juicy gossip i see!!!!!

  2. Becca on September 24th, 2007 19:30

    These are all wonderfully clever takes on the prompt. I particularly like the last one :)

  3. Patricia/Roswila on September 24th, 2007 19:53

    A puppy’s kiss, yes, a wonderful juicy moment.

  4. Rae Trigg on September 24th, 2007 20:42

    I like your haiku about gossip, especially the image of the foot standing ready.

  5. Tumblewords on September 24th, 2007 22:31

    Ah, it’s about juicy gossip and kissing dogs and… wonderful, fun, warm and clever!

  6. Crafty Green Poet on September 25th, 2007 00:47

    Nice variety of juiciness there!

  7. Nancy on September 25th, 2007 06:16

    These are all great. I like the first one. Our society is SO gossip orientated.

  8. greggo on September 25th, 2007 06:18

    these are great. the last two especially brought a smile to my face!

  9. jo on September 25th, 2007 11:07

    Loving one and three! Well done.

  10. spacedlaw on September 26th, 2007 23:19

    That last one is extremely graphic. I can hear the giggles.

  11. patois on September 28th, 2007 06:11

    All three are delightful. I love how you took the prompt in three distinct directions but all tied together. Darling, the last two in particular.

  12. Quietpaths on September 28th, 2007 12:46

    Really great and all three so different!

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