Mind’s Eye, my first Pleiades

Mind’s Eye

Mee, myself and I, find
Muse uncompromising,
metamorphosing mere
meteorology:
mundane clouds fascinate
moon tide leaves puddled tears
majestic mountains crash.

MeeAugraphie
10/11/07

This one took me a while, I had never done a Pleiades, much less heard of one. I do need to ‘get out’ more. Michelle, of Poefiti, recently started a new site, Poefusion. There she has two memes, one each Monday and Friday, but, other challenges as well: she explains what Pleiades is here. While you are there, check out the Paradelle example.

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7 Comments

  1. Tumblewords
    Posted October 11, 2007 at 10:56 am | Permalink

    I haven’t tried this one yet but I can see it’s going to be no easy task. You took the ball and ran - this is lovely, lovely.

  2. Michelle Johnson
    Posted October 11, 2007 at 11:13 am | Permalink

    I loved this. I felt like this was one done from your name and your surroundings. Beautiful and better than mine. Keep up the good work. Thanks for participating.

    Have a nice day.
    Michelle

  3. paisley
    Posted October 11, 2007 at 3:52 pm | Permalink

    i saw the one michelle did on writers island,, and i liked it so much i tried one myself.. then she told me about poefusion and i saw you had the same idea!!!! excellent,, i have to mark her new site…..
    this works for you it really paints a picture of the power of the muse….

  4. Nancy
    Posted October 12, 2007 at 5:55 am | Permalink

    I like this and the marriage poem.

    I have never heard of Pleiades. And, I shouldn’t because I have work to do and cannot write right now. :(

    I think these are my favorite two lines:

    Mee, myself and I, find
    Muse uncompromising,

    It can be so demanding and uncompromising. Thanks for all the links!

  5. jo
    Posted October 12, 2007 at 1:51 pm | Permalink

    Oh I like this…….especially the last three lines.

  6. Christine
    Posted October 23, 2007 at 12:29 pm | Permalink

    Hi! I found your poem on Poefusion. I like how the earthly formations take on a new tone through your muse, and it all begins with ‘M’! These are hard, aren’t they?

  7. LittleWing
    Posted October 24, 2007 at 12:19 pm | Permalink

    while web surfing i found the poefusion…you have a wonderful poem there…it is worthy of your efforts…

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