Pinion by Forethought - Friday 5

Friday 5 at Poefusion brings these 5 words for us to exercise our minds:

pinion
mizzle
bloodshot
gypsy
thirsty

Pinion by Forethought

Bloodshot eyes
thirsty mind
gypsy lust
struggle to
keep order
while his
heart slowly drowns
in mizzle
at twilight.

MeeAugraphie
10/13/07

Why not run over and read what direction other minds went?

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Michelle Johnson

Posted October 13, 2007 at 4:20 am | Permalink

Good Morning! I really enjoyed reading this poem. It is very good. I am glad she had the forethought to wait ’til worked through the tears. The image here is beautiful. Keep up the good work.

Have a nice day.
Michelle
Michelle Johnson

Posted October 13, 2007 at 4:21 am | Permalink

forethought to wait ’til ^he^ worked through the tears. Sorry, I noticed I didn’t place he in the sentence.

Michelle
Michelle Johnson

Posted October 13, 2007 at 4:24 am | Permalink

Thanks for dropping by and writing for Poefusion. I have been receiving some great comments/ poems from this set of Friday 5 words. I truly enjoy seeing what everyone comes up with too. Thanks again for sharing.

Have a nice day.
Michelle
jo

Posted October 13, 2007 at 1:58 pm | Permalink

A lovely spin on the prompt!
Michelle Johnson

Posted October 13, 2007 at 2:14 pm | Permalink

I’m back again. I couldn’t find an e-mail link to e-mail you so I had to leave another comment for you here. My poem, Genocide, is up at Poefiti if you would like to come take a look see. Have a nice night.

Michelle
Tumblewords

Posted October 13, 2007 at 8:16 pm | Permalink

Nice use of the prompt. Double the five words, about! Grin. Like this piece!
paisley

Posted October 14, 2007 at 7:39 pm | Permalink

this makes me see my “predator” after a long fruitless night online!!!!!

MeeAugraphie