Pinion by Forethought - Friday 5
October 13, 2007 | Filed Under Friday 5, Linked, Poetry
Friday 5 at Poefusion brings these 5 words for us to exercise our minds:
pinion
mizzle
bloodshot
gypsy
thirsty
Pinion by Forethought
Bloodshot eyes
thirsty mind
gypsy lust
struggle to
keep order
while his
heart slowly drowns
in mizzle
at twilight.
MeeAugraphie
10/13/07
Why not run over and read what direction other minds went?
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Good Morning! I really enjoyed reading this poem. It is very good. I am glad she had the forethought to wait ’til worked through the tears. The image here is beautiful. Keep up the good work.
Have a nice day.
Michelle
forethought to wait ’til ^he^ worked through the tears. Sorry, I noticed I didn’t place he in the sentence.
Michelle
Thanks for dropping by and writing for Poefusion. I have been receiving some great comments/ poems from this set of Friday 5 words. I truly enjoy seeing what everyone comes up with too. Thanks again for sharing.
Have a nice day.
Michelle
A lovely spin on the prompt!
I’m back again. I couldn’t find an e-mail link to e-mail you so I had to leave another comment for you here. My poem, Genocide, is up at Poefiti if you would like to come take a look see. Have a nice night.
Michelle
Nice use of the prompt. Double the five words, about! Grin. Like this piece!
this makes me see my “predator” after a long fruitless night online!!!!!