Comments on: 3WW - Life, after children’s bedtime

By: Justin (truefaith1963)

Justin (truefaith1963) — Sat, 03 Nov 2007 07:46:15 +0000

Ahh that was lovely. Very warm and comforting.
Is there life after childrens bedtime? I usually fall asleep myself!!

By: Bone

Bone — Sat, 03 Nov 2007 04:33:08 +0000

Good to have you back, Marcia

This was sweet. And yes, I would like to hear a story about the wind.

By: Michelle Johnson

Michelle Johnson — Fri, 02 Nov 2007 03:12:51 +0000

Welcome back! You haven’t skipped a beat. Your poem was really sweet. I am glad the mother chose to soothe her children instead of talking with the person on the phone. Ahh! But, I am sure she can call him back after they fall asleep. Keep up the good work.

Michelle

By: TC

TC — Fri, 02 Nov 2007 02:44:22 +0000

Welcome back!

I enjoyed this. A mother’s job is never done, right? Even after the first bedtime story.

By: Tumblewords

Tumblewords — Thu, 01 Nov 2007 21:11:54 +0000

Ah, how sweet it is. Mixed desires but scared kiddies always deserve a story! Great post! Missed you!

By: gautami tripathy

gautami tripathy — Thu, 01 Nov 2007 17:16:44 +0000

Good to see you back posting. You were missed.

I liked the last stanza.

By: UL

UL — Thu, 01 Nov 2007 12:03:55 +0000

How beautiful! I loved the last stanza, there’s so much comfort here…thanks for sharing.

By: Gay

Gay — Thu, 01 Nov 2007 06:44:18 +0000

As usual, evocative images. I love your work.

By: Herb Urban

Herb Urban — Thu, 01 Nov 2007 04:46:37 +0000

Lovely poem. I have a little one experiencing sleep issues. Your poem struck a chord with me. Nicely done.

By: Clare

Clare — Thu, 01 Nov 2007 03:06:32 +0000

Terrific poem, and the ending really touched my heart — I love this!