Perhaps Not - Poetry tumble continues

A continuation of Poetry Tumble, started from one line of a special poem by a special poet. From that point I took the last line of my poem and made it the first line of another poem, not as a story continuation, but a new poem that stands alone. To see whose poem I borrowed (with permission) a line from — and to read the entire collection in order, click on Poetry Tumble tab at the top of the blog.

Perhaps Not

Perhaps not,
I said,

child’s expectant eyes
dropped almost to his knees

Hello inside,
I said,

positive thinking
was the preferred response!

Perhaps, instead,
I said,

child’s downfallen mouth
turned its corners up.

MeeAugraphie
10/31/07

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