Comments on: Friday 5

By: paisley

paisley — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 17:36:14 +0000

we all need something to hold onto don’t we??? be it in reality or in fantasy,, sometimes it is that one little thing that can make all the difference….

Agree completely, Paisley!

By: jo

jo — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 09:35:33 +0000

Excellent......how those words work!

Jo, thank you. I just plain love prompts, they bring stuff from me out of nowhere, it is great when someone feels the words seem to work well.

By: Michelle Johnson

Michelle Johnson — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 04:13:07 +0000

Struggles of man/ war so well put. You have done such a nice job here. Keep up the good work.

Michelle, you are such the cheerleader to all of us, and your prompts are so great! War is on my mind lately.

By: Tumblewords

Tumblewords — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 02:30:18 +0000

Tender and touching poetry. Melancholy. Nicely done!

Someday, Susan, I will figure out why I like to write so melancholy, it just comes when I get these prompts — but I don’t spend my days feeling like that all the time. Thanks, Susan.

By: UL

UL — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 02:07:11 +0000

Oh so romantic, inspite of the pains, very touching I thought. Thank you.

UL, i'm glad you found it so touching, thank you.

By: Christine

Christine — Sat, 17 Nov 2007 01:17:38 +0000

I used the word theater in the same way you did, as in a war. In just a few words you sum up the tortured moments of a suffering man. I really like your poem.

Thank you, Christine, that use of theater was an immediate response.