Comments on: Monday Mural - Pride

By: lissa

lissa — Sat, 01 Dec 2007 03:37:10 +0000

what a great perspective from the chimney. I like the last part.

Thanks, Lissa, I really enjoyed writing this one.

By: paisley

paisley — Fri, 30 Nov 2007 19:06:24 +0000

very nice mee… i loved this challenge.. the picture spoke volumes, didn’t it???

Thanks, Paisley, I agree on this challenge, I loved it, too.

By: Michelle Johnson

Michelle Johnson — Fri, 30 Nov 2007 16:39:06 +0000

I love the way you personified the lone chimney and made it proud. This was beautiful. Your first and second stanzas are well worded leading us to the final stretch. They also are my favorite lines. Keep up the good work.

Have a nice day.

Thank you, Michelle. This was one of my favorite prompts! As soon as I saw the photo I knew it had to be personified.