Comments on: Daily Lives: Missed Opportunities, Part 1

By: a.tag.along.traveler

a.tag.along.traveler — Fri, 28 Dec 2007 18:08:15 +0000

hum…I like how you let us know just enough to get our imaginations running!! wonderful job!

By: LittleWing

LittleWing — Fri, 21 Dec 2007 20:16:37 +0000

awesome post…wow, you have portrayed so clearly a small moment…very moving…

By: gautami

gautami — Fri, 21 Dec 2007 03:08:05 +0000

It has a depth of meaning..I look out for next part.. amnesia

By: UL

UL — Thu, 20 Dec 2007 21:40:43 +0000

Oh this was really nice, Marcia….so many missed opportunities. But somehow I believe that if it was meant to be…fate would bring them together again. Thanks.

By: black-eyed susan

black-eyed susan — Thu, 20 Dec 2007 20:24:33 +0000

Whoa! It is easy to overlook the necessity of the fire.

By: Tumblewords

Tumblewords — Wed, 19 Dec 2007 22:44:02 +0000

Yup, this is good. I hope there is a part 2…

By: Linda Jacobs

Linda Jacobs — Wed, 19 Dec 2007 22:19:02 +0000

Oh, I have so been there! And yes, he missed the fire in my eyes, too! Great poem!

By: pjd

pjd — Wed, 19 Dec 2007 22:06:48 +0000

Ooh, very nice. There is so much of real life hidden in there, wrapped up in such an efficient and lyrical package. I love this.

By: TC

TC — Wed, 19 Dec 2007 20:57:41 +0000

I feel his pain… I’m clumsy about men so I understand well!

By: paisley

paisley — Wed, 19 Dec 2007 18:53:24 +0000

mee,, that was perfection… you captured it.. better then a snapshot ever could….