Comments on: Poetry Tumbled quickly, Two More http://meeaugraphie.com/2008/02/11/poetry-tumbled-quickly-two-more/ All about me, my words, that is! Tue, 06 Jan 2009 23:35:56 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: Bone http://meeaugraphie.com/2008/02/11/poetry-tumbled-quickly-two-more/comment-page-1/#comment-4259 Bone Tue, 12 Feb 2008 19:40:02 +0000 http://meeaugraphie.com/2008/02/11/poetry-tumbled-quickly-two-more/#comment-4259 I liked this a lot, Marcia. Of course, I usually do. This really hit home for me, though. Those last two lines are powerful. Resounding. Also reminds me of a George Eliot quote: "It's never too late to become what you might have been." I liked this a lot, Marcia. Of course, I usually do. This really hit home for me, though.

Those last two lines are powerful. Resounding.

Also reminds me of a George Eliot quote: “It’s never too late to become what you might have been.”

]]> By: TC http://meeaugraphie.com/2008/02/11/poetry-tumbled-quickly-two-more/comment-page-1/#comment-4241 TC Mon, 11 Feb 2008 20:08:44 +0000 http://meeaugraphie.com/2008/02/11/poetry-tumbled-quickly-two-more/#comment-4241 <i>“knock knock who’s there? Someone. Someone who? Someone I didn’t mean to become….” why didn’t he just write a new ending? </i> Wow... that ending really got me. I thought it was enough of a pang with the "Someone I didn't mean to become..." but then you had to finish driving the nail in the coffin with that last line. Nicely done. “knock knock
who’s there?
Someone.
Someone who?
Someone I didn’t mean to become….”

why didn’t he just write a new ending?

Wow… that ending really got me. I thought it was enough of a pang with the “Someone I didn’t mean to become…” but then you had to finish driving the nail in the coffin with that last line.

Nicely done.

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