Change - Haiku

I was I am I
will be more if I embrace
change, as usual.

I have dearly missed writing Haiku every week for One Deep Breath, I am not sure how it escaped me each week these past few months. So, on to a fresh start with One Single Impression. So many writers of Haiku. Follow the link and just be amazed at their words.

11 Comments

  1. Posted March 4, 2008 at 12:13 pm | Permalink

    Hi! I like this so much: it is something I need to be reminded of often. Like everytime I fight change! Welcome and you are now on the blogroll!

  2. Posted March 4, 2008 at 2:13 pm | Permalink

    I like the run-on haiku style - breathless and somewhat reluctant… Nice!!

  3. Posted March 4, 2008 at 3:43 pm | Permalink

    I share the views of Andree and Tumblewords and would like to piggyback on their words. This is lovely. Thanks for joining in.

  4. Posted March 4, 2008 at 10:35 pm | Permalink

    i so need to relearn change.. this was very meaningful for me

  5. Posted March 5, 2008 at 12:12 am | Permalink

    Perfect! Wonderful rhythm and truth in a beautiful poem. Thank you.

    <a href=”http://meeyauw-pad.blogspot.com/2008/03/one-single-impression-change.html” rel=”nofollow”>My “Change” is here</a>. Thank you!

    Thank you, Andrée, for seeing a truth in it.

  6. Posted March 5, 2008 at 2:20 pm | Permalink

    This really spoke to me in its possibilities and in its wisdom, thank you. BTW, you are right about Rialto Beach. The two big sea stacks being James Island and to the north Cake Rock. Truly one of the most inspirational places on the planet and I am delighted that you recognized the photos.

    Quietpaths, thank you for confirming my guess on the location and naming the sea stacks. I could not remember what the rocks were called. It is simply an awesome beach. I am delighted the poem spoke to you.

  7. Posted March 6, 2008 at 12:22 am | Permalink

    the words seem to move from chaos to order in one breath…fabulous!

    Thank you, Qualcosa di Bello. I normally think in one breath, I think.

  8. Posted March 6, 2008 at 1:16 pm | Permalink

    …how truthful that rings today..right now for me… change often entails losing some part and gaining another… beautful

    I love change, LittleWing, thank you.

  9. Posted March 6, 2008 at 5:31 pm | Permalink

    Wonderful! I like what you did when you split the line…:D

    Why thank you, Maryt.

  10. Posted March 6, 2008 at 11:51 pm | Permalink

    This is awesome!


    Thank you so much Noah, I mean Noah the Great.

  11. Posted March 7, 2008 at 4:57 pm | Permalink

    I love this . It is great.

    Thank you, Yolanda, I’m glad you love it.

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