Change - Haiku

March 4, 2008 | Filed Under Haiku, Ons Single Impression 

I was I am I
will be more if I embrace
change, as usual.

I have dearly missed writing Haiku every week for One Deep Breath, I am not sure how it escaped me each week these past few months. So, on to a fresh start with One Single Impression. So many writers of Haiku. Follow the link and just be amazed at their words.

Comments

11 Responses to “Change - Haiku”

  1. Andrée on March 4th, 2008 12:13

    Hi! I like this so much: it is something I need to be reminded of often. Like everytime I fight change! Welcome and you are now on the blogroll!

  2. Tumblewords on March 4th, 2008 14:13

    I like the run-on haiku style - breathless and somewhat reluctant… Nice!!

  3. SandyCarlson on March 4th, 2008 15:43

    I share the views of Andree and Tumblewords and would like to piggyback on their words. This is lovely. Thanks for joining in.

  4. paisley on March 4th, 2008 22:35

    i so need to relearn change.. this was very meaningful for me

  5. Andrée on March 5th, 2008 00:12

    Perfect! Wonderful rhythm and truth in a beautiful poem. Thank you.

    <a href=”http://meeyauw-pad.blogspot.com/2008/03/one-single-impression-change.html” rel=”nofollow”>My “Change” is here</a>. Thank you!

    Thank you, Andrée, for seeing a truth in it.

  6. Quietpaths on March 5th, 2008 14:20

    This really spoke to me in its possibilities and in its wisdom, thank you. BTW, you are right about Rialto Beach. The two big sea stacks being James Island and to the north Cake Rock. Truly one of the most inspirational places on the planet and I am delighted that you recognized the photos.

    Quietpaths, thank you for confirming my guess on the location and naming the sea stacks. I could not remember what the rocks were called. It is simply an awesome beach. I am delighted the poem spoke to you.

  7. qualcosa di bello on March 6th, 2008 00:22

    the words seem to move from chaos to order in one breath…fabulous!

    Thank you, Qualcosa di Bello. I normally think in one breath, I think.

  8. LittleWing on March 6th, 2008 13:16

    …how truthful that rings today..right now for me… change often entails losing some part and gaining another… beautful

    I love change, LittleWing, thank you.

  9. maryt on March 6th, 2008 17:31

    Wonderful! I like what you did when you split the line…:D

    Why thank you, Maryt.

  10. Noah the Great on March 6th, 2008 23:51

    This is awesome!


    Thank you so much Noah, I mean Noah the Great.

  11. yolanda on March 7th, 2008 16:57

    I love this . It is great.

    Thank you, Yolanda, I’m glad you love it.

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