Comments on: 3WW - Headed South

By: UL

UL — Tue, 18 Mar 2008 16:53:48 +0000

this was very touching and spoke volumes..nicely done Marcia. I have been away too long, your new site looks lovely…let me catch up.

Thank you, UL. It was emotional writing it, I was lost in the story.

By: Rose Dewy Knickers

Rose Dewy Knickers — Sat, 15 Mar 2008 13:23:37 +0000

Good stuff Marcia, you are on a roll.

Rose

By: OneMoreBeliever

OneMoreBeliever — Fri, 14 Mar 2008 17:57:33 +0000

WOW… i was thinkin hummffff, unemotionally available then i read pjd’s comments read it again and could see that as well… that’s an excellent poem mee… i love the emotion that whispers in shouts…(just a little note…b/c thrz another gal named littlewing in the poetry blog community im changing from littlewing to onemorebeliever…)

By: TC

TC — Thu, 13 Mar 2008 04:02:52 +0000

This was really good Marcia. So sad, so heartbreaking, so real.

By: laane

laane — Thu, 13 Mar 2008 01:10:37 +0000

…where his tears would be hidden from all.
Wow!

You can find my entry here: The Fire

Have a great day!

By: Tumblewords

Tumblewords — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 20:43:57 +0000

Nicely done! ‘Enough is enough’ is a telling phrase in this piece. Enjoyed it!

By: pjd

pjd — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 17:56:13 +0000

by the way, I meant to also say I liked the poem, especially its rhythm and the final thought about tears hidden by the rain

By: pjd

pjd — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 17:55:41 +0000

Hmm, I didn’t get “bottled up emotions” so much as “don’t sweat the small stuff.” I read in this that he got sick and tired of her drama queen act and finally gave up, but it was the inability to make it work that he lamented in the end.

By: pia

pia — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 17:03:55 +0000

That was beautiful. Since beginning to blog I never have bottled emotions

By: paisley

paisley — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 16:54:49 +0000

the demons of bottled up emotion… i am happy that that is no longer a scenario i have to deal with … this was lovely marcia…