Comments on: 3WW – Reality

By: Bone

Bone — Sun, 30 Mar 2008 20:41:24 +0000

At first, it put me at a rehearsal dinner. He made a toast that changed her life forever. Or maybe not. Bone's last blog post..The Wall

By: UL

UL — Fri, 28 Mar 2008 12:52:20 +0000

really nice…hey there’s a gift awaiting you at my space, hope you will like it, i havent been able to come by lately, but wanted to let you know that you are in my thoughts.

Thank you, UL, on both accounts!! We all miss having you around and your writing.

By: OneMoreBeliever

OneMoreBeliever — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 16:16:03 +0000

thoroughly enjoyed the read… love stuff like this… full of intrigue and stories within stories…

By: rel

rel — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 08:56:48 +0000

Marcia,
Making goodbyes palatable is a gift that few master.
Romance where only a void is left…well done!
rel

By: pia

pia — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 01:32:17 +0000

To know the depth of a heart is to know everything, and why shouldn’t a poet “give” an ending sometimes. Rules are made to be broken

By: Christine

Christine — Thu, 27 Mar 2008 00:14:21 +0000

I’m imagining a best man at a wedding, giving a toast to the bride and groom, with a secret message for one of the guests.
Intriguing poem, M.

By: AnthonyNorth

AnthonyNorth — Wed, 26 Mar 2008 22:37:31 +0000

A great reality lying hidden in the words.

By: Tumblewords

Tumblewords — Wed, 26 Mar 2008 18:46:27 +0000

thanks for the warning – fiction or not? – this has layers of questions and reams of response! Nice!

By: lissa

lissa — Wed, 26 Mar 2008 17:25:40 +0000

I like it. fiction or not. I don’t what his words can be but it must be something so honest, so direct that it can only be the truth.

By: TC

TC — Wed, 26 Mar 2008 16:58:55 +0000

I can go in so many different directions with this one. I feel like someone who was watching something through glass and couldn’t hear a word that was said. I just know it was awkward, and uncomfortable, and I’m curious as all get out!

Nicely done, Marcia.