Friday Five - Untitled
March 28, 2008 | Filed Under Friday 5, Poetry
Michelle at Poefusion chose these five words for us. I am late, but it is still Friday, or will be, if I can get my computer to stop acting weird: fling - cranberry - winsome - prey - quacky
23:15:00 Begin
23: 20:27 finally confirmed a word definition
23:20:50 Really begin:
My mind, quacky as always,
tried to fling words
as a child would fling a cranberry
across the porch
while stringing them on garlands
(when no one was looking of course -
over the age of 13)but my muse fought to remain winsome,
after all so much had interfered with my
perfect birthday weekend:work, and thoughts unbecoming a cheerful person
chose that special time to prey
on the fewer muscles that controlled the smile
and weakened them,and so I relied on my skill
at writing words
of melancholy and sadness,but they seemed reluctant
to participate.And so, by default, smile took over
and I cannot help but grin at this
pathetic attempt at Friday Five….23:31:10 End
MeeAugraphie
03/28/08
Note: 23:38:38 - Just got it copied and pasted and link in, took me all that time to figure out it was acting weird because I switched browsers tonight… hmmm. Who knows what will happen when I click Publish….
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well,, it left me with a smile on my face!!!! so i guess it did its job after all……
Success, unintentional on my part, but your smile made me smile again, too. Thanks, Paisley.
I’m impressed - you managed that in record time, scored a success and created more than one smile! Nifty!
It was your birthday and we missed it?!?!?! Hope you had a great day
You’ve roused a smile from me as well. Most of my day was bad too. So, your poem was a nice lift-me-up. Have a nice weekend.
I like this, not pathetic, but amusing
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