One Single Impression left us stranded this week - not. I have a feeling there will be many stranded thoughts evoked. Mine were:
Haiku:
Stranded whale flounders
turtle seeks destruction’s light
human plays hero
Fib:
She
stood,
unable
to remain stranded
by own stubborn streak’s closed mind.
Increasing Syllables, One thru seven:
Left
Stranded
by her muse
she looked at nature
through her inner child’s eyes
and found seven wonders more.
Acronym
Stuck alone in mind’s island,
Traffic stalled
Refuse blocks thought’s forming as
Acrid tears flow unchecked
No one to hear your
Darkness falling as
Escalated fears
Defy logical plan of action
Un-punctuated Thought
Night closed in to smother hope as moon hid behind clouds and owls hooted to break silence’s stranglehold on nerves for needle read as empty as stomach as empty as a heart never filled as empty as the road to nowhere in a Saturday night flick watched sans another human being on a teenager’s prom night
All written by MeeAugraphie 04/06/08
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15 Comments
A very nice set of reactions to the prompt
Gerald’s last blog post..ABC Wednesday - K is for Katikati Haiku Pathway
wow.. first of all i have to compliment you on that little piece of prose at the end… very nice.. i think i will try something like that soon….
this was a work out i can tell,, and i will tell you you aced every one.. i especially love the way the one with the increasing syllables worked out..
paisley’s last blog post..strange old bird
fantastic! it was a veritable poetry playground…
qualcosa di bello’s last blog post..stranded
Increasing syllables is my favorite among these very well written poems. Thanks.
SandyCarlson’s last blog post..One Single Impression: Stranded
It took me hours to compose one simple poem. I can’t imagine being able to do the wonderful things with words that you do. I love the increasing syllables poem because she found seven wonders more.
Andrée & Michael’s last blog post..Signs of Spring: Geese in Beaver Bog
You truly are a wordsmith. Wonderful play with the theme.
These are all wonderful. I especially like the One through seven and the Acronym.
Raven’s last blog post..One Single Impression: Stranded
Acronym is wonderful! Thanks for trhe treat!
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gautami tripathy’s last blog post..wicked witch—–Read Write Poem/Monday Poetry Train
How wonderful that you can be so inspired by one word to produce such gorgeous poetry.
patois’s last blog post..Haiku: Stranded
Impressive! I love the way you wrote through this - fascinating!
Innovative response to the OSI prompt. I agree that the last prose poem is really a great ride, but all the poems are excellent.
Billy’s last blog post..Cycles
What an intriguing way to explore a thought. I particularly like how this one worked itself through:
Left
Stranded
by her muse
she looked at nature
through her inner child’s eyes
and found seven wonders more.
Wow, these are not only fabulous but now I need to try them.
TeriC’s last blog post..Stranded Mandala
Left
Stranded
by her muse
she looked at nature
through her inner child’s eyes
and found seven wonders more./u step it up here!is it break dance?Thanks.
zoya gautam’s last blog post....Expression in slow motion../autism awareness /
wow… whada word form challenge… every single impression was a beautiful gift wrapped in words… especially enjoyed unpunctuated thought…
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