Three Word Wednesday rocks! Look at the words Bone chose: Picture – Reflected – Stop. Are they not the coolest ever? OOPS, left our “stop”, too bad, I love it the way it is! And this one, I wrote it, and then inserted the next to the last stanza in pieces between the others. Guess you could say, I actually edited some….
Word Power
She found herself fascinated
with life reflected through words
(hers and theirs)Each decision revealed
leaped from the page
replayed in her head
she fretted or rejoiced
as if her own(Her mind became a scary place
as each decision begged to be retried)Each emotion wafted
from the page
became hers
entwined in her own
within her heart(Her heart stretched and sagged
as each stored emotion jockeyed for air time)Each picture created
whether in technicolor,
black and white,
or faded vision,
burned into her soul(Her soul’s canvas was at near capacity
of painted tattooed visions)She found herself fascinated
with life reflected through words
(hers and theirs)
… and told her
mind, heart, and soul,“Deal with it!”
MeeAugraphie
04/23/08
i read so many blogs essays articles books stories,, my mind is continuously assaulted with words.. some pleasing,, some painful,, but every one a building block…….
this was an excellent concept…..
Thank you, paisley.
paisley’s last blog post..its simplest form
I think you perfectly echo the thoughts of us all there.
Marvellous!
I did think many of us felt the same, thank you, Anthony!
AnthonyNorth’s last blog post..WINDOW ON DEATH
words do have a strong impact on people. it can make you laugh, smile, smirk or cry. i think it is a writer’s hope that his/her words are understood and shared by his/her readers.
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I like the idea that so many thoughts are building, converging, making something in someone’s mind.
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Great job, Marcia~ I think every writer has many words tangled inside their heads and they have to find a way to plead them out. Thanks for sharing this with everyone. Have a nice day.
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The pen is mightier… I really like this post -
Yes, “Deal with it.” I like that ending! So real! Love the “painted tattooed visions!”
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I think you have come up with the perfect poetry to describe a ‘meme’. “(E)ach decision begged to be retried,” One idea spawns another until the original is totally changed. Wonderful.
b
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Nice take on the prompt; I especially liked the parenthesized thoughts, they seem to bind it together, Thanks for sharing and thank you for the comments
Just Someone’s last blog post..Picture perfect…
Marcia,
For certain words make all the difference. I compose my greatest verbage while running but to capture and put it down on paper at the end is the greatest challenge.
rel
There’s something profound with that one, a fusion of thoughts and meaning!
jujee’s last blog post..Bone’s 3WW – picture, reflected, stop
Absolutely fantastic!!! Wonderful writing – I can’t get over the strong image of a heart stretching and sagging. WoW. The pacing, emotive content and visual art references weaved a rich tapestry of a poem! thanks for sharing with 3WW.
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just lovely, I like the emotions express here
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Writing is so difficult and you so perfectly captured the confusion
pia’s last blog post..3WW: Picture; reflected; stop: Fiction; The End of the World
That was a great piece of writing. So many emotions displayed. fear, joy, melancholy…
Medhini’s last blog post..Déjà vu
yes, so poetically placed within the text.. feelings and emotions written in letters that we all feel… thank you
OneMoreBeliever’s last blog post..awake
This could almost be a mini drama script with all the asides. But the grand finale “deal with it” is awesome.
Gemma
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